January Assessment Learner Response!
mark: 17 , grade: 4
WWW: This is a good assessment that shows we definitely need to move your target grade much higher. This exam clearly as potential to reach those higher grades - well done!
EBI: The area to focus on is Q6: the 20 marker essay. Avoid repeating points and make sure you offer detailed evidence from the CSPS. I have top-level example essay to demonstrate how to include this in your answer.
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7. I think I missed out on the marks because I didn't revise.
8. I got 5 marks out of 8 and I could of included how there was a lack of femininity in the advert and how the bicep was an act of masculinity.
9. Vertical integration requires a company's direct ownership of suppliers, distributors, or retail locations to obtain greater control of its supply chain. The advantages can include greater efficiencies, reduced costs, and more control along the manufacturing or distribution process.
10. I could have used ,
In purely financial terms,
#WeAreAllDanielBlake.
In addition, a premiere was held in
Newcastle
The title and key quotes from the film were projected on buildings
around the UK including the Houses of Parliament in London. All of this helped to generate £11m at
the worldwide box office, making this one of
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