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Preliminary exercise feedback and learner response

 1.  WWW: Your editing skills are really very good here – lots to credit. Excellent continuity editing, clear narrative communicated and a perfect product shot at the end of the advert. Both music tracks work really well too – excellent selection and introduced at the right time. The only issue is that the clips are the example videos we filmed in class so we don’t have any of your own original video which is a crucial part of the process. This is something to consider when choosing how to proceed with your coursework project.   EBI: In terms of the editing, the main feedback from this project is the audio tracks. The music is great but you still have the audio tracks from the video which means you can hear the direction and instructions to actors. It’s a great lesson for future editing projects as you need to edit with headphones on or audio up and check your work carefully before exporting. In this case, you needed to either drag the video file only on to the timeline or alternativel

Year 11 Paper 1 Assessment: Learner Response

 1. WWW:  You start well but now you need to add the revision and practice to reach the upper levels throughout. The potential is definitely there. EBI: Revision: Narrative theory, Learn / revise the CSPS in Q7 you needed detailed divided examples from Black Widow. 2.Athletic body connotes that the subject is in condition and well prepared for the ‘battle’. • No direct address but the subject’s eyes are focused on pushing the heavy tyre (physical exertion) which connotes determination and power in the face of adversity. This is reinforced by his facial expression which has his mouth open in a roar which connotes supremacy and effort. • Dress code has connotations of strength since the trainers are engaged in the activity and the clothes are functional and appropriate for task so they connote success and durability. The make-up shows sweat and dirt which has connotations of being ready for action and taking part / effort. 3. Excellent analysis of the product that is detailed and critica

Video Adverts Pre-Productions

 SCRIPT: [Scene: A serene morning setting with sunlight streaming through a window. A person sits at a kitchen table, brewing a cup of green tea.] Narrator (soft, inviting voice): "Start your day the green way. With every sip of our premium green tea, you embrace a moment of tranquility." [Cut to scenes of nature: lush green tea fields, leaves glistening with morning dew.] Narrator: "Handpicked from the finest leaves, our green tea is packed with antioxidants to energize your body and soothe your soul." [Scene shifts back to the person enjoying their tea, looking relaxed and focused.] Narrator: "Feel the difference. Discover balance, clarity, and wellness in every cup." [Text on screen: “Brew your moment. Drink green tea.”] Narrator: "Refresh your routine with our delicious green tea. Taste the nature, sip the peace." [Scene fades out with a logo and website link.] SCRIPT 2: [Scene: A vibrant kitchen filled with fresh fruits and vegetables. A per